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#7 - Sent: Saturday, 2008. December 06. 17:22 - [profile]
hey I'm posting again, thanks girls *hugs* okay, back to the story. "Oh sh.." tj thought, but he couldn't say. Even if they wouldn't hear him or the little demon he's shy and now being in the girls locker room. 30 some fit, cute, not so cute, develop, and not so develop, and laughing having a ball. if they knew he was in here while they were taking their clothes off. Man, he wouldn't see the life of day. While he was being so cought up in the moment the demon was also having fun, stealing clothes, ripping underwear, a Shriek was all it took to snap tj out of whatever was going on in his mind and went to the yell. when he got their the demon was sitting on top of the lockers "hey, hunter. what's going on." waving at him." the poor boy looked at the then looked at the damage he cause. it like he knew something bad happen cause everything s-s-s-l-l-l-o-o-o-w-w-w-e-e-e-d-d-d d-d-o-o-w-w-n-n, like a bad car crash. all he did was rip a bra and the girl felt it fall and covered up. but few seconds was all it took and tj went back to covering his face. the little devil laughed and went through the wall. before he knew it he looked and the demon was gone. this day just seems to get harder and harder. |
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miiyo forum admin posts: 2467 |
#6 - Sent: Tuesday, 2008. October 28. 18:27 - [profile]
It's going good. You have my attention on this one ^_^ Keep up the good work! Though I do need to say, sometimes I get lost within the forest of words. Maybe entering within paragraphs could help that. Since stories might be longer than the RPs (the posts that is) It's all right to post more than 2 posts. [Reply to post #5] |
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Kittyninja user posts: 911 |
#5 - Sent: Friday, 2008. October 24. 20:21 - [profile]
"screw the bus, I'm going to run and get this dirt and smell off" taking off as a red streak. it took two minutes to get to his new school. he knew where it was one of his best friend went their. Went he got to the school at the back entrance he jumped to the roof and use the rock to clear the flames. without everyone knowing he had to get flame resistant shoes and clothes under his other clothes so he would go out naked. jumped back down and walk inside to the school, the piece of normal he had left. school was fairly easy, but jocks sometimes he wish he could used he power in front of everyone, but he knows people would panic plus some would get hurt cause his school is so packed with kids and it has two floors, having a fight on the second floor is not a good idea. however he did have help Amy, was everyone thinks she is a geek but after saving her from some trouble. she never once to anyone his secret, and covers was he does, now she control nature. Alvin, his best friend and has been his tag team mate through all of this they even share one body and one mind and fuse together. he control lighting impulses "it happen again didn't it?" he ask him as Tj sat down. "it happen to you too?" "yea, put I was able to short circuit it." "lucky bastard," Tj said with a smirk on his face. "from now on you get all the robots." "A robot? why didn't they come after me?" "they don't know about you, yet. Be thankful cause they are going to find out and that will be then end of normal for you. you have to watch everyone, and stay on your guard." After lunch it was back to class and then the fun started cause at study hall, he would leave his body spiritually and had have his guardian angel watch over him, and take over his body. he went into the gym and felt something weird he looked down at the gym floor and saw a small demon looking around and went through a door. curious he went after it. going through the door too. when he got to the demon his face turn beet red and covered his eyes. |
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#4 - Sent: Friday, 2008. October 24. 19:19 - [profile]
If you haven't notice Tj, haves some sort of a special ability, able to control heat. funny story: Years back, 3 years ago to be exact, his body temperature went higher then any normal human body could last. The normal body temp is 98.6 degrees and can't handle anything above 105 degrees, his broke 112. he went to the hospital and went he woke up he was in a pool of warm water in the emergency room, it was once nothing but ice at first. He said he met god when he passed out and after a while he's life went back to normal. however strange things started to happen around people question the school systems, with all the strange thing happening around the school. The school contact the local leaders but ended up at the federal level, cause he isn't alone there are bunch of kids like him, and they try to keep a close eye on him for strange activities and so does area 51, thought that think was fake didn't you. And the strange events demons, he called them, would control people and lead the world to the end of it. and it almost happen. They scientist called it a solar flare close to earth. and the collapse of solar energy in the earth atmosphere. in lames term they said some strange activity in the solar system. people had a field day. as the sky turned back with red clouds and a eclipse on the sun. people feared the end of the world, and they were right to some degree. however that all passed and now he is a teenager now trying to pull all that pass him. (it won't let me post the rest) Edited: Friday, 2008. October 24. 19:36 |
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xena23 user posts: 197 |
#3 - Sent: Friday, 2008. October 24. 05:29 - [profile]
Very interesting i can't wate to see what will happen next. |
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miiyo forum admin posts: 2467 |
#2 - Sent: Friday, 2008. October 24. 05:07 - [profile]
Interesting. Very. So that was the prologue and the rest of the story will be Third...whew. First person is sometimes confusing to me, but I manage. Good work. I like it. [Reply to post #1] |
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Kittyninja user posts: 911 |
#1 - Sent: Thursday, 2008. October 23. 17:08 - [profile]
Man, Walking sucks. The reason why is because I'm not old enough to learn to drive. and I don't need too. I have other mean of transportation too. Walking to bus, I feel something following me but I keep on going. This is TJ. is his a 14 year old teenager starting his first day at high school. with is a big move for anyone. but he a few extra problems, beside dating, grades, bullies, and what other boys worry about. 3 years ago something happen. I stop turn around throwing my backpack to the ground and as I turn something hot misses my face and hit road. "why you." i take off to see this half human half metal guy. hey throws his left arm to swat me away but I duck I hit him with an uppercut that hurt my hand. so I kick him away "damn, it's slow starting out again." the cyborg opens his right hand and I machine gun comes out pointing at me. I back up and take off. "shit," I run into the street and some idiot driving fast hit me in my leg as I roll on the top and fall to the ground with my right arm on the hood trying to lift myself up. "Ow, don't people read the sigh." The guy comes out and ask and I alright, which is pretty dumb since I got hit by a speeding car. well the robot wasn't going to wait and he leaps into the air and lands on the hood of car crushing it. thankfully I move my arm out the way, but he grabs my neck and toss me into a two stories house. then tosses the car at me. and I'm slow to get back up but I did see him toss the car so I roll out the and get to the edge to jump down. but as I get to the ground that thing is right there to kick me through the glass and wooden door and my back hits the back of the car. then he points the gun at me, and I know bullet plus gas equals boom. finally my hands heat up to the point that I put them together its like a dragon mouth opened up torching that metal dip stick. when I finish heating up that junk, I i jump to my feet and kick him into the fire hydrant across the street. "that should do it." wiping my hands looking for the man that hit me but all the panic he must have left, also in the panic the cyborg shots holes into my backpack. "oh no no no no. why now not on the first day of school." holding my shot up book-bag. I had no idea How messed up my first year of high school was going to be like. (the rest is in third person with others talking so what do you girls think) |
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